I like it, but I tend to like more of a "wet" sound. Others might say it's drowning a little, but everything was clear and articulate enough for me (at least through my PC speaker/sub setup). :)
Are you going to add other instruments? I heard a few points in there which would be perfect to have other things join in.
(Oh yeah, the name is a bit lame though. ;) :D )
ironsheep#3 · Feb 28, 2009 03:35 UTC
yep, that sounds good
the only thing I could critique would be the dynamics - couple spots where the notes/attack punched pretty hard in an otherwise smooth environment. that's minor though, I liked it.
fingers#4 · Feb 28, 2009 15:26 UTC
Craig - It is very wet, seems to work with only two guitars - it was deliberate - playing with the delays to keep time. but if more instruments come in, a busier mix-would likely have to back off on that wetness as it would probably turn into a mess. I have thought about bringing in some other instruments, extend it to a full length track, sort out the flakey spots.
Sheep - I see what you mean about the dynamics, a bit snappy in spots, something for me to watch out for.
thanks for listening and giving feedback
evzevz#5 · Feb 28, 2009 17:57 UTC
I like it fingers. Agree with sheep on the dynamics part - you could probably tame that with a pressor or even some judicious volume automation.
I like the instrumentation - I think the fact that other instruments don't join in adds to it's emotion in a stark kind of way, if that makes any sense. If you did add anything you wouldn't want it to become cliche.
desertbluesman#6 · Feb 28, 2009 19:31 UTC
I like the playing a bunch. Nice stuff. What did you use to get the guitar into recorder? Miked up or digital device?
Jon_G#7 · Feb 28, 2009 20:45 UTC
I was just about to ask the same thing. That's a nice tone, is it miked or modeller?
fingers#8 · Feb 28, 2009 22:40 UTC
It was done with Revalver,
In fact the jam is a few months old, when I stumbled on it again recently, my first thought was the C30. (The lame name was to remind me where to find it, it is buried away in an FNJ project)
voxman#9 · Mar 01, 2009 13:01 UTC
Very nice fingers - reminded me a little of Mark Knopfler. Stopped a bit suddenly though, just as I was getting into it! :-?
Kabala#10 · Mar 05, 2009 16:57 UTC
The melody has a familar feel to it, even if I've never actually heard it before, guess thats a cool thing then, huh? :)